We will meet some problems when we go abroad;that is,we can go backpacking travel or tour travel trip;however,both are a large number of similarities and differences.There is no answer which is better than another.Because there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages;thus,let us discuss the issue.
Although the two are different types of trip,they have in common.For example,they can make us release our stress and experience different culture.We can not only buy a lot of local souvenir but also have a fun time.It is essential for us to travel.
Both are the trip;however,they are still some differences.Firstly,we have no tour guide to guide us the city;therefore,we must have a map to search for the site by myself.Secondly,if you choose tour travel trip, you have the plan and you do not pay additional money;therefore,tour travel trip is more expensive than backpacking travel.Finally,how indepent backpacker is.There is not the limit of time so we can go some places which we like for a long time.
No matter what kind of trip,there are still somebody who may choose.Some people who do not want to be controled may choose backpacking travel and someone who have no idea in traveling may choose tour travel trip.Which kind of trip is better? As for me,Iprefer tour travel trip than backpacking travel.Because I am not a aperson who have some ideas in traveling;hence,I make tourist agency arrange my plan.It is also a good choice for me.
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Ian, it is clear that this journal is produced based on the comparison-contrast struture. Well done. :)
ReplyDeleteYet, it is a pity that there are some mistakes and errors that confuse me while reading. For example, I don't think the first clause in the very beginning in the first paragraph has anything to do with the rest of that paragraph. You mentioned 'problems', but you didn't talk about it.
Also, you need to revise 'they have in common' in line 1 of paragraph 2. What do they have in common?
Moreover, you need to point out that you were talking about 'backpacking travel' in line 2 of paragraph 3 so that your reader could understand you were talking about the shortcoming of backpacking travel. If you read the first few lines of paragraph 3 again, you would find yourself lost, too.