Labor education is an activity which makes freshman take part in. In the mean time, the activity is also a course of school. It divides into three stages in a semester. Every stage has the head of group, and they will distribute to a job to every freshman. The purpose is to clean the environment of school.
However, we need to clean up every day, so most of the students are not willing to attend it and usually complain the activity,. A lot of students find some ways to ask for leave and avoid cleaning up. The course keeps continuing in a year. There is a rule that was set by school. If you do not pass the course, you can not graduate from school.
Finding some ways to avoid activity is not a good way. The head of group must make the record of attendance. They still need to fill the vacancy being present; otherwise, you must fail the course and even keep doing in second grade.
As to me, I have to go to the place of labor education in the afternoon and begin doing the job; although, I also complain the activity and even hate it but I still clean it up.
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Come on don't hate it Ian, don't say ut so loudly. :D:D
ReplyDeleteHi Ian
ReplyDelete我發現學生complain的時候英文會變順喔
Still, there are some mistakes for you to revise
1.
Labor education is an activity which makes freshman take part in.
文法沒錯, 但意思錯了
請改成 an activity that every freshman has to take part in.
2.
In the mean time, the activity is also a course of school.
第一把mean time合起來
3.Every stage has the head of group, and they will distribute to a job to every freshman.
一"為什麼用"the" head
二"多了一個to
4. However, we need to clean up every day, so most of the students are not willing to attend it and usually complain the activity,.
很好寫得很順
檢查一下標點符號
complain需要一個介係詞
5. The course keeps continuing in a year. There is a rule that was set by school.
keep是多的
in a year 改for a year
there is a rule...改成: This is a rule...
6. If you do not pass the course, you can not graduate from school.
沒錯
7. Finding some ways to avoid activity is not a good way.
改成 It is not good to find ways to avoid the labor education.
8. The head of group must make the record of attendance.
可以把must改掉嗎?
9. They still need to fill the vacancy being present; otherwise, you must fail the course and even keep doing in second grade.
把must改掉
they跟you請一致
10 As to me, I have to go to the place of labor education in the afternoon and begin doing the job; although, I also complain the activity and even hate it but I still clean it up.
為什麼用being doing??
complain要有介系詞